paraphrase the bear attacks

The original: In the Yellowstone National Park in U.S., statisics show that you are more likely to be drown than to be attacked by a bear. In the period between 1839 and 1994, 101 people died from drowning but only 5 people were killed by grizzly bears.


The new one: The statisics from Yellowstone National Park, U.S., shows you that you have lower chances to be attacked by a bear than drowning. 101 people died because of drowning in 1839 and 1994, but only 5 people died from the bear.

summary of shark attack

I'm going to summarize the article called shark attack.

The first step, read
The second step, reread
The third step,take notes
-low chances
-more likely to struck by lightning
-more likely to drown
-traveling in group or stay out of the water if scared
The fourth step, take away original and last, summarize.
I will now summarize the article, 'shark attack'.

Even though you can be attacked by a shark, the percentage is very low. It is more likely to struck by a lightning or to drown. If you are still scared, traveling in group or stay out of the water will help.

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