Wednesday, August 3, 2011

compare ad contrast essay

I belive going to the Ranch West camp is the best way to spend your whole summer vacation. Other two camps, Big Apple and Head Splash was interesting too. But Big Apple will be too strict. We may have recess little, but that wouldn't manage all the stress you'll be getting. It's also too short 3 weeks is like, after 2weeks 'Now I'm adapt to this camp. I'm getting along with friends, teachers are not too bad...' Then camp ends. Just when you've found your interests. Head Splash, I think they won't study a lot. There are too many recesses. So if you want to rest, you might wanna go to Head Splash. But for us, there is no better camp than Ranch West. First its length is acceptable. Not too long, not to short. Second, we can meet other family and maybe learn consideration. The final, and the most important reason to me was we can study any subiect I want. I believe that we can study best when we are in our best condition. So these three reasons, and negative sides was the biggest prime factor why I chose Ranch West Camp.

1 comment:

  1. You have done OK, but I think you can try a little harder and do better. Take a look at my essay at glps16writing.blogspot.com. That is what I am looking for. You need to use transition words!

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