Thursday, August 11, 2011

paraphrase the bear attacks

The original: In the Yellowstone National Park in U.S., statisics show that you are more likely to be drown than to be attacked by a bear. In the period between 1839 and 1994, 101 people died from drowning but only 5 people were killed by grizzly bears.


The new one: The statisics from Yellowstone National Park, U.S., shows you that you have lower chances to be attacked by a bear than drowning. 101 people died because of drowning in 1839 and 1994, but only 5 people died from the bear.

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