Wednesday, August 17, 2011

proofread+editing skill posting

              I believe that going to the Ranch West is the best way to spend your whole vacation. Other two camps, camp big apple and Head Start Splash were interesting too. But when we think of all the benefits, Ranch West Camp will be the best camp for all of us. I have some ideas to support my opinion.

              I think that the most important standard of the best camp is the programs. So my writing will be based on the programs. The Camp Big Apple, the Head Start Splash, and the Ranch West Camp are all made for studying english. As I said, the 'best camp' is so personal that I had to make a standard out of it. Big apple might be the best place to study. The teacher's qualities are high. The programs would be based on preparing english test or learn grammers. But it will be too stricted. Unlike the Big Apple, the Head Start Splash is too loose. It has too many recesses and make us depend on our parents. Everytime we see the beach, we will be eager to play outside. However, the Ranch West Camp has normal schedule, suitable recess times, and the length is good too.

             In conclusion, if you are the guy who wants to study, Big Apple is the right place for you. If you want to have some rest, you better go to Head Start Splash. But people like us, who are both willing to study and play, Ranch West is the best decision.

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